My self-introduce for the interview of postgraduate examination. Could you help me correct mistakes.

Respected Professors，
         Good morning! I’m very glad to be here for this interview. Let me briefly introduce myself. <strike>briefly</strike>. My name is LiXin, I also have an English name which is Bruce Lee. I’m 29 years old. I come from Dalian, a coastal city of Liaoning province. It’s a beautiful and romantic city in China. I graduated from the fine art department of Changchun Normal University in July, 2006. I hope to have the <strike>I could get the </strike>opportunity to finish my postgraduate courses in Northeast Normal University, which I have desired for a long time. In the past five years I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while <strike>I have been</strike> working as a graphic designer in a design company. The result of all my hard work is the opportunity to be interviewed by you. <strike>Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you</strike>.
In my spare time I pursure a broad range of interests such as,  <strike>Well, in my spare time, I have broad interests such as</strike> soccer, playing the trumpet and listening to music, especially classic music. I used to be a member of military band in our college. At the National Students Art Competition in 2005 the military band of Changchun Normal University <strike>in 2005 shows the National Students Art Competition</strike> won first prize in Jilin province.