Juan Garcia
Write a letter or email to your new pen-friend from abroad and introduce yourself. /** Say where you come from, where you live and give a little information about your family and friends as well as your hobbies and interests. Say how long you have been learning English and how you would like to improve your English. Write 80-100 words. **/ Hello my friend. I’m Juan Garcia. I’m a friendly person and I like to meet you. I’m live now in Montevideo the capital of the Uruguay. One year later I lived in my parents house with my parents and my two brothers that are more little than me. But now I’m renting a apartment with my girlfriend. I had so many hobbies before this year I played tennis, took guitar lessons and studied a little bit about programming. But this days I’m studying English every day after work. I’m still learning English since October 2015 taking lessons in italki. I feel that I’m improving a lot but I have to many thing to improve.
2016년 3월 28일 오후 11:45
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Write a letter or email to your new pen-friend from abroad and introduce yourself.

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Say where you come from, where you live and give a little information about your family and friends as well as your hobbies and interests. Say how long you have been learning English and how you would like to improve your English. Write 80-100 words.
**/
Hello my friend.

I’m Juan Garcia. I’m a friendly person, and I would like to meet you. I’m live now in Montevideo, the capital of the Uruguay. One year later ago, I lived in my parent's house with my parents and my two brothers that who are more little younger (?) than me. But now I’m renting an apartment with my girlfriend.

I had so many hobbies before this year. I played tennis, took guitar lessons and studied a little bit about programming. But this these days I’m studying English every day after work. I’m still have been learning English since October 2015 taking lessons in on italki. I feel that I’m improving a lot, but I have to many things to improve.


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Oye, que buen trabajo. Espero que mis sugerencias son útiles.

2016년 3월 29일
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Write a letter or email to your new pen-friend from abroad and introduce yourself.

/**
Say where you come from, where you live and give a little information about your family and friends as well as your hobbies and interests. Say how long you have been learning English and how you would like to improve your English. Write 80-100 words.
**/
Hello my friend.

I’m Juan Garcia. I’m a friendly person and I would like to meet you. I’m living now in Montevideo the capital of the Uruguay. One year later ago I lived in my parent's house with my parents and my two brothers that are more little younger than me. But now I’m renting an apartment with my girlfriend.
I had so many hobbies before this year I played tennis, took guitar lessons and studied a little bit about programming. But this these days I’m studying English every day after work. I’m still I've been learning English since October 2015 by (?) taking lessons in on italki. I feel that I’m improving a lot but I have to many thing to improve on.

* For present tense, you can either say "I live" or "I'm living" 
If a noun starts with a vowel, instead of the article "a" you must use "an" (example: an oval, an ant, a balloon)
You go "on" a website (example: I'm going on facebook. I spend a lot of time on twitter).
2016년 3월 29일
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