Evan wang
ChangCheng is one of the best places for people to visit. Looks to me like it’s a symbol of China. This was an historical, magnificent and epic construction. where be visited by millions of people every year, even i haven’t been visited Beijing yet, I’ll be there one day
2022년 5월 15일 오후 2:46
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The Great Wall of China is one of the best places for people to visit. It looks like it’s a symbol of China to me. It is a historical, magnificent and epic construction which is visited by millions of people every year. Even though I haven’t been visited Beijing yet, I’ll go there one day.
Nice writing practice. 😊 Americans don't know the Chinese name of this wall. We call it "the Great Wall of China" in English.
2022년 5월 16일
ChangCheng is one of the best places for people to visit. It seems to me like it’s
a symbol of China, and is a historical, magnificent and epic construction.
Millions of people visit each year, but I haven't visited yet, I will one day.
2022년 5월 15일
ChangCheng is one of the best places for people to visit. To me, it seems like it’s
a symbol of China. This was an historical, magnificent and epic construction.
It is visited by millions of people every year.Although, I haven’t visited
Beijing yet, I’ll go there one day.
Thank you for sharing a wonderful place to visit in China. I had never heard of it before. I hope you get to go to Beijing one day too. ( you should had a few mistakes)
2022년 5월 15일
The Great Wall is one of the best places for people to visit. For my part, it’s a symbol of China. It’s a historical, magnificent and epic construction. Millions of people come to visit every year. Although I haven’t visited Beijing yet, I’ll be there one day.
2022년 5월 16일
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