Joanne Chadavoine
My favorite moment is when I come back in the house the cat come towards me, it caressed my feet.
2022년 7월 4일 오후 8:15
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My favorite moment is when I come back in the house and the cat comes towards me to caress my feet.
Good sentence construction.. Keep practising and all the best. Please feel free to check my profile and see some reviews from my students.. Would be an honour to work with you
2022년 7월 4일
My favorite moment is when I got back home, the cat came up to me and caressed my feet.
Hi Joanne. "Got back home" is more natural. When we talk about your house, we say "home" and we are thinking of the general place where you live, not about the physical building. Please don't worry about mistakes - we can learn from them. Keep practicing!
2022년 7월 4일
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