Ivan
Hi, could you check these sentences, please? 1) I dropped a glass in the morning and it flew apart into slivers. 2) Volunteers helped bind wounds of people that were injured during the competition. 3) My cousin clung onto his cuddly toy while watching scary cartoon. 4) He lives not far away from a hospital therefore he's used to hearing wailing sirens. 5) Everyone was really happy to see mellow spring sunlight after long cold winter. 6) I'm not that sure whether this rope is going to hold out. It looks too flimsy. 7) The picture on my grandma's TV was really fuzzy so it was really unpleasant to look at it.
2020년 11월 9일 오전 6:51
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Hi Ivan For the first one I would say "I dropped a glass in the morning and it shattered into many pieces".
2020년 11월 9일
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Hi Ivan, I would be glad to help you. 1) I dropped a glass in the morning and it broke apart into pieces. 2) Volunteers helped bind the wounds of people who were injured during the competition. 3) My cousin clung onto his cuddly toy while watching a scary cartoon. 4) He lives near a hospital therefore he's used to hearing wailing sirens. 5) Everyone was really happy to see mellow spring sunlight after a long, and cold winter. 6) I'm not that sure whether this rope is going to hold out. It looks too flimsy. 7) The picture on my grandma's TV was really fuzzy so it was really unpleasant to look at it. Good sentences and ideas. I hope this helps 😀
2020년 11월 9일
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Hi Ivan. In answer to the third one, the only word missing is "a" which should sit between watching and scary. This will make a complete sentence.
2020년 11월 9일
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