fiona
can i use this sentence: Recent years have witnessed.... For example: question 1. The internet will bring about a new freedom of information and so narrow the gap between developed and developing countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? Recent years have witnessed a trend that information is more easily to access due to the development of the internet. I totally agree with the view that it lead to a reduction in the gap between developed countries and developing countries.
2014년 11월 8일 오후 12:02
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Recent years have witnessed a trend that information is more easily (say: it is easier, not more easily) to access due to the development of the internet. I totally agree (I strongly agree) with the view that it has lead to a reduction in the gap between developed countries and developing countries. ***If this is for an academic argument, then try to use 'I strongly agree' not 'I totally agree'. The reason = It sounds to casual. But other than that point, your English is great!!
2014년 11월 8일
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