Heidi
Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of ... Is this ok?Although a Chinese poem only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness. Thanks
2019년 3월 10일 오전 12:16
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Needs small tweaks. Although Chinese poems only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness. or Although a Chinese poem only has 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness. Going even further, .. Although a Chinese poem might only have 4 to 8 lines, you can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness (from it). Although a Chinese poem might only have 4 to 8 lines, it can still give you a deep sense of happiness or sadness.
2019년 3월 10일
"Although a Chinese poem only has four to eight lines, it can convey a deep sense of happiness or sadness." (not "having a sense of happiness", "still" doesn't add anything )
2019년 3월 10일
Although a Chinese poem only has four to eight lines, it can still have a deep sense of happiness or sadness.
2019년 3월 10일
아직도 답을 찾지 못하셨나요?
질문을 남겨보세요. 원어민이 도움을 줄 수 있을 거예요!