Winnie
Google calendar, Google map, Google mail, Yahoo mail, WhatsApp, Signal, Facebook and Onenote are the must-have apps on my phone, especially Google calendar, Google map, WhatsApp and Signal. I can say I can not live without them now. I do save all of the important events in Google calendar and it's convenience to review my schedule. I have a poor sense of direction and therefore I need Google map if I visit a new place. WhatsApp and Signal are two of the most famous communication apps nowadays. I must have them to keep contact with my relatives, friends and colleagues.
Onenote is one of the apps that I often use recently. I use it to keep my English lessons notes and recipes that I love (its function for me just like a cookbook). I can check a recipe easily during cooking.
2022년 8월 10일 오후 9:03
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Google calendar, Google map, Google mail, Yahoo mail, WhatsApp, Signal, Facebook and Onenote are the must-have apps on my phone, especially Google calendar, Google map, WhatsApp and Signal. I can say I can not live without them now. I do save all of the important events in Google calendar and it's convenience to review my schedule. I have a poor sense of direction and therefore I need Google map if I visit a new place. WhatsApp and Signal are two of the most famous communication apps nowadays. I must have them to keep contact with my relatives, friends and colleagues.
Onenote is one of the apps that I have been using recently. I use it to keep my English lessons notes and recipes that I love (its function for me just like a cookbook). I can check a recipe easily during cooking.
Hi Winnie, Very nice text! I changed the verb tense here: Onenote is one of the apps that I *have been using* recently. You can also use *often* but with the simple present (to indicate routine). You can't use *often* and *recently* in the same sentence, since they signal two different verb tenses. I hope that's helpful!
2022년 8월 10일
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