Alice
My hometown is Chaoshan and I brow and grow up in Shenzhen.
I want to talk about Shenzhen this city.
Other people say "If you come to Shenzhen and you are becoming Shenzhen person." Because Shenzhen is a Migrant city. All the people come from another city and live in this city.
I remember when I was a kid, my classmate from different city and speak Mandarin, Cantonese, Hakka, Teochew. But we are in the class speak Mandarin. That's the reason why I can speak some various .
Shenzhen people always work overtime, because the prices and houses are expensive. People work in Shenzhen away 996. 996 refers to a working system that requires employees to work from 9:00 AM to 9:00 PM, six days a week.
The "women of Shenzhen" means that women meet and do not talk about gossip and family affairs, but about making money.
Although people who live in Shenzhen have high life pressure, this city attracts young people from all over the country. So this city is a very younger city .
The climate is pleasant, the greening is good, the roads are clean, free parks, convenient metro ,various libraries and cultural centersand and safe public security management.
2022년 11월 29일 오후 2:48
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My hometown is Chaoshan, I was born and grew up in Shenzhen. I want to talk about
Shenzhen city. Other people say, "If you come to Shenzhen you will
become a Shenzhen person", because Shenzhen is a migrant city. People
come from another city and live in this city. I remember when I was a kid, my
classmate from a different city spoke Mandarin, Cantonese, Hakka and Teochew. But in the class we spoke Mandarin. That's the reason why I can speak different languages. Shenzhen people always work overtime, because the prices and houses
are expensive. People who work in Shenzhen work a 996. 996 refers to a working system
that requires employees to work from 9:00 AM to 9:00 PM, six days a week. The
"women of Shenzhen" means that women meet and do not talk about gossip and
family affairs, but about making money. Although people who live in Shenzhen
have high life pressure, this city attracts young people from all over the
country. So, this city is full of young people. The climate is pleasant, the
grass is green, the roads are clean, free parks, convenient metro, various
libraries and cultural centersand and safe public security management.
I hope this helps. I couldn't figure out what you were trying to say in some few sentences, I would love to go through the corrections with you to understand exactly what you were trying to say. Overall this is good work.
2022년 11월 29일
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My hometown is Chaoshan and I brow and grow up in Shenzhen. I want to talk about
Shenzhen this city. Other people say "If you come to Shenzhen and you are
becoming Shenzhen person." Because Shenzhen is a Migrant city. All the people
come from another city and live in this city. I remember when I was a kid, my
classmate from different city and speak Mandarin, Cantonese, Hakka, Teochew. But
we are in the class speak Mandarin. That's the reason why I can speak some
various . Shenzhen people always work overtime, because the prices and houses
are expensive. People work in Shenzhen away 996. 996 refers to a working system
that requires employees to work from 9:00 AM to 9:00 PM, six days a week. The
"women of Shenzhen" means that women meet and do not talk about gossip and
family affairs, but about making money. Although people who live in Shenzhen
have high life pressure, this city attracts young people from all over the
country. So this city is a very younger city . The climate is pleasant, the
greening is good, the roads are clean, free parks, convenient metro ,various
libraries and cultural centersand and safe public security management.
2022년 11월 30일
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