SIN KA HIM, Perry
1. I love play basketball, i enjoy contributing in a team. Being a team member, i can show off my strength and skills that i good at. 2. I have a complete happy family. Living with family members make me feel incrediably safe and happiness, i can share and tell my experience with my son and work together with my wife and mom. 3. I feel relaxed in life, i treat things in a relaxing way. I would not force people to do things, i respect others need. 4. I didn't have too many friends, i enjoy live in a small group. I have few close friends who i can talk to. 5. I enjoy simple life and things, i didnt thrive for complicate relationship and i avoid temptation. 6. I am Self awareness, i love quiet and classical Music recently because i can concertrate to work in its background Music. 7. I love Sport but i would exceed my limit that help prolong my sport career. 8. I thrive for work life balance, i will insist keeping my time with family. 9. My low personal desire may help life easily or obstruct my career. 10. I am satisfied with this stage, the only thing concern is our family member live healthy and happily.
2024년 9월 30일 오전 8:18
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1. I love to play basketball. I enjoy contributing to a team. Being a team member, I can show off my strengths and skills that I am good at. 2. I have a complete happy family. Living with my family makes me feel incredibly safe and happy. I can share my experiences with my son and work together with my wife and mom. 3. I feel relaxed in life. I do things in a relaxing way. I do not force people to do things and I respect others' needs. 4. I don't have too many friends. I enjoy having a small group. I have few close friends who I can talk to. 5. I enjoy a simple life and the little things. I don't thrive to complicate relationships and I avoid temptation. 6. I have self awareness. I love being quiet and listening to classical music recently because I can concentrate to work when I have a background music. 7. I love sports but I would like to exceed my limit to prolong my sports career. 8. I thrive living life in balance. I prefer spending more my time with family. 9. My lack of personal desire may help me live life easily or obstruct my career. 10. I am satisfied with this stage of my life. My only concern is for my family members to live healthily and happily.
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2024년 9월 30일 오후 6:51
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1. I love to play basketball, I enjoy contributing to a team. By being a team member, I can show off my strength and skills in which I am good at. 2. I have a completely happy family. Living with family members make me feel incredibly safe and happy. I can share and tell my experiences to my son and work together with my wife and mom. 3. I feel relaxed in life, I treat things in a relaxing way. I would not force people to do things since I respect needs of others. 4. I didn't have too many friends, I enjoy life in a small group. I have few close friends who I can talk to. 5. I enjoy simple life and things, I don't thrive in complicated relationships and I avoid temptations. 6. I am self aware and I love quiet and classical music recently, because I can concertrate on my work while it plays in the background. 7. I love sports, but I would exceed my limit that helps prolong my sporting career. 8. I thrive in my work and life balance, I insist in having time with my family. 9. My low personal desire may help my life easily or obstruct my career. 10. I am satisfied at this stage, my only concern is that our family members live healthy and happily.
I did not understand the following (in brackets) 7. I love sports, (but I would exceed my limit that helps prolong my sporting career). 9. My low personal desire may help my life easily (or obstruct my career.)
2024년 9월 30일 오후 12:42
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