Sabrina
I am going to write about the lama that I have never seen.
I saw this animal on social media sites like Google, Facebook,Telegram and YouTube.
When I see this animal's photo, It makes me positive because they are very cute and they have interesting smile. This is "Lama".
There are also cartoon about the lama. Children watch this cartoon. 👩💻🧑💻
2021년 1월 8일 오후 1:20
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But they are not so cute when they spit in your face!
2021년 1월 16일
I am going to write about an animal that I have never actually seen in person: a llama. I have, however, seen this animal many times on social media sites like Google, Facebook, Telegram and YouTube. Whenever I see this animal's photo, it makes me feel happy because they are unique, are rather cute in my opinion, and they have facial expressions that remind me of people with devious, ready-to-play-a-trick-on-you, smiles. Definitely, this describes a llama. Believe it or not, there are also cartoons about the llama, and many children enjoy watching them.
Hi, Sabrina. Good job! Whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you.
*Nice touch including the pictures! Whenever I am in Bangkok, waiting for the BTS to arrive, the platform screens often advertise for a Thai cellphone company (?). They use fake llamas (actors or puppets, not real animals) as mascots in their ads, and also have them swing their heads back and forth to annoy the spokesperson, which personally, I find extremely hilarious. It never fails to make me laugh out loud. Then, I do it to my friends in the crowded BTS, and everyone in the train is laughing because they have seen that commercial before at some point, too.
2021년 1월 16일
I am going to write about the llama, an animal that I have never seen. I see this animal on
social media sites like Google, Facebook,Telegram and YouTube. When I see this
animal's photo, It makes me feel positive because they are very cute and they have an
interesting smile. This is "Llama". There are also cartoons about the llamas, that
children watch. 👩💻🧑💻
2021년 1월 8일
I am going to write about the lama that I have never seen. I saw this animal on
social media sites like Google, Facebook,Telegram and YouTube. When I see this
animal's photo, It makes me positive because they are very cute and they have an
interesting smile. This is "Lama". There is also a cartoon about the lama.
Children watch this cartoon. 👩💻🧑💻
2021년 1월 8일
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