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Today’s weather is cloudy and high temperature is thirty degrees and According to weather reporter, it may be rainy in the afternoon. The wind was blowing and the breeze felt so nice and it is also not hot. I like today’s weather. Although it may be rainy in the afternoon, It’s OK because I can go homework earlier.
2023년 7월 5일 오전 12:04
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Today’s weather is cloudy and the high temperature is thirty degrees. According to a weather reporter, it may be rainy in the afternoon. The wind was blowing and the breeze felt so nice. It is also not hot. I like today’s weather. Although it may be rainy in the afternoon, it’s OK because I can do my homework earlier.
If the wind is no longer blowing, the original text is fine; otherwise, it should be "The wind is blowing and the breeze feels so nice".
2023년 7월 6일
Today’s weather is cloudy and the temperature is high: thirty degrees. And according
to a weather reporter, it may be rainy in the afternoon. The wind is blowing and
the breeze feels so nice and it is also not hot. I like today’s weather. Although
it may be rainy in the afternoon, It’s OK because I can go home earlier.
2023년 7월 5일
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