Nelly
Elders have lived through various life situations, so they offer a depth of understanding that comes from experience, not just theoretical knowledge. They can share insights on how to handle life’s challenges, setbacks, and triumphs with resilience and patience. With time, our elders often develop a clearer perspective on what truly matters in life—such as health, love, peace, and happiness. They can teach us to balance work and personal life, as well as how to focus on long-term fulfillment over short-term success, which is often overlooked in books focused on achievement. Elders often possess practical, hands-on knowledge in areas like cooking, gardening, craftsmanship, or even simple problem-solving skills, which are learned through practice and not often documented in formal education or books. Many elders have lived through times of hardship, and they can teach us the importance of hard work, sacrifice, and perseverance. They can provide lessons on resilience and determination that go beyond what can be found in any textbook.
2025년 1월 17일 오후 4:00
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Elders have lived through various life situations, so they offer a depth of understanding that comes from experience, not just theoretical knowledge. They can share insights on how to handle life’s challenges, setbacks, and triumphs with resilience and patience. Overtime, our elders often develop a clearer perspective on what truly matters in life—such as health, love, peace, and happiness. They can teach us to balance work and personal life, as well as how to focus on long-term fulfillment over short-term success, which is often overlooked in books focused on achievement. Elders often possess practical, hands-on knowledge in areas like cooking, gardening, craftsmanship, or even simple problem-solving skills, which are learned through practice and not often documented in formal education or books. Many elders have lived through times of hardship, and they can teach us the importance of hard work, sacrifice, and perseverance. They can provide lessons on resilience and determination that go beyond what can be found in any textbook.
Changed "with time" to "over time" for better phrasing - No other changes were necessary, as your text was clear and well-structured
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