wendy
During my chidhood, there were plenty of interesting things happened. Most of them gave me many sweet memories. I still remember that I and my firends went to school and back home together. We played some fun games which could improved our friendships. Without smartphone, we spent most of our time doing outdoor activities. We caught little fish in rivers, chased beautiful butterflies in parks. The soft shushine and fresh breeze helped us grew up healthy. When my mother prepared the dinners, we said goodbye to each other and went home unwillingly. When I enjoyed the tasty dishes which my mother cooked , everything looked kind around us. Until today, when I meet my childhood friends, we always feel warm to each other. No matter how long we have not seen each other, the moment when we get together, we have a lot of things to talk. The sweet memories have carved on our hearts and have became the origin of our happiness.
2025년 4월 9일 오전 7:19
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During my childhood, many interesting things happened. Most of them left me with sweet memories. I still remember how my friends and I went to school and came back home together. We played fun games that helped strengthen our friendship. Without smartphones, we spent most of our time outdoors. We caught little fish in the rivers and chased beautiful butterflies in the parks. The soft sunshine and fresh breeze helped us grow up healthy. When my mother was preparing dinner, we would say goodbye to each other and head home, though we never wanted to part. As I enjoyed the delicious meals my mother cooked, everything around us felt warm and kind. Even today, whenever I meet my childhood friends, there’s always a special warmth between us. No matter how long it’s been since we last saw each other, the moment we reunite, we have so much to talk about. Those sweet memories are carved into our hearts and have become the foundation of our happiness.
2025년 4월 10일 오전 2:15
During my childhood, plenty of interesting things happened and most of them gave me many sweet memories. I still remember when my friends and I went to school and came back home together. We played some fun games which improved our friendship. Without smartphones, we spent most of our time doing outdoor activities. We caught little fish in rivers or chased beautiful butterflies in parks. The soft sunshine and fresh breeze helped us growing up healthily. When my mother prepared dinner, we said goodbye to each other and reluctantly went back home. When I enjoyed the tasty dishes (which) my mother cooked, everything around us looked nice. So far, each time I meet my childhood friends, we always have warm feelings towards each other. No matter how long we have not seen each other, we always have a lot of things to talk each time we meet again. The sweet memories were carved into our hearts and have become the origin/source of our happiness.
2025년 4월 9일 오전 10:44
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