Yui
Hello there, I want you to correct my writing. Yesterday, I was able to knit a garment without worrying something and thinking about different. Then, I realized that how saved my life the knitting does. First, it clears my head. Recently I am learning English seriously and making a habit of it, so I care about English more than my free time. I couldn’t stay focused on what I am doing now. So I found knitting causes me refreshed. Second, I feel pleasant. Currently, I am making a muffler, and it is almost finished after I will knit a few rows. When a garment is taking shape, you feel confident and happiness. Knitting is a meditation for me. It suits me and my life turns into a better one. Because yarns and needles calm me down, and seeing the finished works makes me smile. Sometimes patterns are difficult, but it is a worthwhile try. So I like Knitting.
2024년 10월 31일 오후 2:05
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Hello there, I want you to correct my writing. Yesterday, I was able to knit a garment without worrying and thinking about things. Then, I realized how much knitting has been a life saver to me! (or: how much knitting has saved my life!) Firstly, it clears my head. Recently I have been learning English seriously and making a habit of it, so I care about my English more than i do my free time. However I struggle to stay focused on whatever it is I am doing now. So I found that knitting makes me feel refreshed. (or: knitting refreshes me) Secondly, I feel pleasant. Currently, I am making a muffler, and it is almost finished, just as soon as I have knitted a few more rows. When a garment is taking shape, you feel confidence and happiness (or: confident and happy). Knitting is like a meditation for me. It suits me and turns my life into a better one. Because yarns and needles calm me down, and seeing the finished works makes me smile. Sometimes patterns are difficult, but it is a worthwhile trying. So I like Knitting.
Great stuff! And good luck completing your muffler!
2024년 10월 31일 오후 2:19
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