I admire my best friend, She bravely accepted her illness and I learned from her to think about the solution not the problem. She always says that there is a good we can't see in every difficult situa

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I admire my best friend, She bravely accepted her illness and I learned from her to think about the solution not the problem. She always says that there is a good we can't see in every difficult situation. She always do her best and I'm pretty sure if tomorrow is the end of the world, She will keep learning. I'm very lucky to have beautiful, smart and wise friend like her.

2021년 1월 25일 오후 9:00

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I admire my best friend, She bravely accepted her illness and I learned to think about the solution of the problem from her. She always says that there are positive points that we can see in every difficult situation. She always do her best and I'm pretty sure if tomorrow is the end of the world, She will keep learning. I'm very lucky to have beautiful, smart and wise friend like her.

It eu to correct a bit !

2021년 1월 25일

I admire my best friend. She bravely accepted her illness and what I’ve learnt from her is to think about the solution, not the problem. She does her best and often says that no matter how bad a situation might seem, there is always some good aspect to it. I'm pretty sure that even if the world was ending tomorrow, she would’t panic calm. I'm very lucky to have such a smart, beautiful, and kind-hearted friend like her.

Sounds like a great friend, yepe you’re lucky A few tweaks: she does not require capital letters. The sentence with - bad situations - was open to different interpretations. If the world ends she will learn - semantically ( logically) is not correct. She cannot keep on learning when it ends, but she can - be calm or not panic She does not do Pay attention to commas and dots

2021년 1월 26일

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