90 day's training: Day 30 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) Yesterday, I took a piano seminar. After that I had lunch with other assemblies. 2) Our lunch time is always w

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90 day's training: Day 30 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) Yesterday, I took a piano seminar. After that I had lunch with other assemblies. 2) Our lunch time is always worth for me. We can enjoy the chat. 3) One of them showed me a their concert program. The lineup of the music pieces were really on a high level. I took a relief because I didn't join the concert. 4) Today I chose a piano piece for a small concert. It'll must be fun because it is for duo. 5) I have not so many experiences for duo pieces. It is a Debussy's piece, so I can try to make french sounds as well. I'm looking forward to it.

2024년 10월 16일 오전 4:51

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90 day's training: Day 30 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) Yesterday, I took a piano seminar. After that I had lunch with other attendees. 2) Our lunch time is always worth it/valuable for me. I enjoy chatting with you. 3) One of them showed me their concert program. The pieces were really difficult/virtuosic. I was relieved that I didn't play in the concert. 4) Today I chose a piano piece for a small concert. It'll be fun because it is for a duo/ it is a duet. 5) I have not much experience playing duets. It is a Debussy piece, so I can try to make French sounds as well. I'm looking forward to it.

ASSEMBLIES is not the word you want. IT WILL MUST has too many verbs. A Debussy piece, or Debussy's piece. It must by the Petite Suite. Good luck making French sounds - maybe you should get an Erard piano :-)

2024년 10월 16일 오전 6:06

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