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I bought an accessory because I lost an earring. It is the earring of Mars. It sways and adds the ring of the planet. When it sways, it is sparkling blue. I imagine the beautiful universe while seeing it.
2023년 7월 29일 오후 2:33
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I bought an accessory because I lost an earring. It is an earring in the form of Jupiter. (Mars has no ring). It sways and includes the ring of the planet. As it sways, it sparkles with blue. Seeing it, I imagine the beautiful universe. Since "seeing it" modifies "I", it should be placed next to "I".
2023년 7월 30일
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I bought an accessory because I lost an earring. It is the earring of the shape of Mars. It sways and adds the ring of the planet. When it sways, it sparkles blue. I imagine the beautiful universe while looking (gazing) at it.
2023년 7월 29일
I bought a new pair of earrings because I lost one. They look like Mars. They sway and have the ring around the planet. When they sways, they are sparkling blue. I imagine the beautiful universe while looking at them.
Normally earrings are sold in pairs. I guess you lost one earring and bought a new pair. Unless you can just buy one. Mars is called the Red planet and doesn’t have rings. Are you sure these aren’t supposed to be Saturn, Uranus or Neptune?
2023년 7월 30일
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