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Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fullful his duties at time, but there is something that he often does, he likes to make dumb gimmicks. That kind of stuff makes bother to his sisters which it is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's tight with the sport coach of the neighborhood that's why he can train in the local gym as long as he helps the coach to set in order the gyim stuff at the end od the day trip.
30 dec. 2024 23:03
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Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fullful fulfills his duties aton time, but there is something that he often does, he likes to make to play dumb gimmpranks/tricks. That kind of stuff makes bother toannoys his sisters which it is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's tight withclose to the sports coach of the neighborhood , that's why he can train in the local gym as long as he helps the coach to set in orderup the gyim stuff at the end odf the day trip. Not a bad piece of writing. Hope the corrections help you. What about booking me for 30 minutes soon? You could use some English help I think
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31 december 2024
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Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fullfulfills his duties aton time, b. But there is something that he often does,: he likes to make dumb gimmicks??. That kind of stuff makes bother tos his sisters which, but it is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's tight with the sport coach of the neighborhood that's why he can train in the local gym as long as he helps the coach to set in orderneighborhood sports coach, who lets him train in the local gym in exchange for straightening up the gyim stuffequipment at the end od the day trip.
I'm pretty sure 'gimmicks' should be a different word, but I don't know what you mean to say.. Also - the sentences about training in the gym don't seem to have anything to do with the previous sentences. Are they supposed to?
31 december 2024
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