When I was a child the condition around me didn't like what it is today.We didn't have enough story books to read.But I was eager to read story or liked my parents to read story for me.It's the most u

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When I was a child the condition around me didn't like what it is today.We didn't have enough story books to read.But I was eager to read story or liked my parents to read story for me.It's the most unforgettable childhood memories.I still remembered the most wonderful story I had read in my childhood called "Calabash Brothers".It was a story about seven braver boys who were born from calabash on the journey of saving their grandpa.At first, there were two monsters lived in a cave, one was snake and the other is crab.They were a couple and did plenty of bad things caused the villages couldn't live.Where they passed by the creatures would died including any green.One day a deity gave a old man(the boy's grandpa) some calabash seeds and told him that you should put them in soil and you would got seven calabash in seven colours like the rainbow.Each calabash had a boy inside and they would got out one by one when there were ripe.Each boy was powerful and had a special skill, liked using fire,water ane even couldn't get injured when other chop him. They could beat the monsters and saved the villagers.It's their destiny.But the monsters heard this new and took the old man away.After they were born, they went to save their grandpa one after one,but all of them failed and caught by the monsters.Even the 7th boy betrayed them.Finally the old man remembered that besides the seeds the deity also gave him a staff called Seedpod of the lotus.Only these boys did anything together they could be successful.But now,the boys had been thrown into a furnace by the minsters and they would be turned into a panacea which could make everyone lives forever.So, the old man lied to the monsters they should add the Seedpod of the lotus in the furnace and then could be successful.After throwing it in to the furnace they just heard a loud noise and saw the seven boys became a new boy.He was the most powerful boy could use every skill the seven boy had used.Finally, he beat the monsters.

8 jul. 2022 08:16

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When I was a child the conditions around me weren't like it is today. We didn't have enough of story books to read. But I was eager to read stories or liked my parents to read them to me. It's the most unforgettable childhood memory. I still remember the most wonderful story I had read in my childhood named "Calabash Brothers". It was a story about seven brave boys from Calabash who were on a mission to save their grandpa. At the beginning there were two monsters that lived in a cave. One was a snake and the other a crab. They were a couple and together they troubled the villagers. Wherever they passed by the creatures would die including the trees. One day a diety gave the boy's grandpa some calabash seeds and told him to plant them. Seven calabash in seven colours like the rainbow would grow from them. Each calabash had a boy inside and he would come out when the fruit was ripe. Each boy was powerful and had a special skill such as using fire, water and even wouldn't get injured when another chopped him. They could beat the monsters and saved the villagers. It was their destiny. But the monsters heard of this new and took the old grandpa away. After the 7 boys were born, they went to save their grandpa, but all of them failed and were caught by the monsters. Even the 7th boy disappointed them. Finally the old man remembered that besides the seeds the diety also gave him a staff called Seedpod of the lotus. Only if the boys did anything together, they would succeed. But now, the boys had been thrown into a furnace by the monsters and they would turn into a panacea which would destroy everyone forever. So, the old man lied to the monsters that they should throw the Seedpod of the lotus into the furnace if they wanted to be successful. But after throwing it into the furnace, they heard a loud noise and saw the seven boys turn to one strong man. He was the most powerful and could use every skill the seven boys had. Finally, he destroyed the monsters.

8 juli 2022

When I was a child, my living conditions were not as they are today. We didn't have enough story books to read. But I was eager to read stories and I liked when my parents were reading stories for me. It's the most unforgettable childhood memories. I still remembered the most wonderful story I had read in my childhood called "Calabash Brothers”. It was a story about seven brave boys who were born from calabash on the journey of saving their grandpa. At first, there were two monsters living in a cave, one was a snake and the other was a crab. They were like partners and caused a lot of harm to villages so the villagers couldn’t live there anymore. Wherever they passed, every living creature would die including plants. One day a deity gave an old man (the boy's grandfather) some calabash seeds and told him that he should sow them to get seven calabashes of seven different colours like a rainbow. Each calabash had a boy inside and they would come out one by one when the calabashes were ripe. Each boy was powerful and had a special skill, such as using fire, water and they even couldn't get injured when struck by a sword or a knife. They could beat the monsters and save the villagers because it was their destiny. But the monsters heard the news and took the old man away. After they were born, they went to save their grandpa one after one, but all of them failed and were caught by the monsters. The 7th boy even betrayed them. Finally, the old man remembered that besides the seeds the deity also gave him a staff called the Seedpod of the Lotus. Only if these boys do anything together, they could be successful. But now, the boys had been thrown into a furnace by the monsters and they would be turned into a panacea which could provide immortality to anyone. The old man then lied to the monsters by telling them they should add the Seedpod of the lotus in the furnace to make a successful preparation.

Because of the character limitation I couldn't put the end of the corrections, here it is : "After throwing it into the furnace they just heard a loud noise and saw the seven boys becoming alive again. They resuscitated under the form of one powerful boy who could use all the skills of his seven predecessors. In the end, he beat the monsters." Good work, that's a nice tale.

8 juli 2022

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