Riman
Technological advancements is growing rapidly in the past few years, and there are countless of new inventions that are made to facilitate our life, including the electrical cars. In my opinion, electrical cars is an excellent invention for many reasons. To begin with, electrical cars have a positive impact on environment, and they are considered as environmentally friendly par excellence, because they don’t produce exhaust fume. Moreover, as this invention contribute in decreasing the air pollution, it is beneficial to our health.Besides, these cars don’t need petroleum and consequently, they are economical because the sources of electricity are more available and cheaper than the petroleum. In a nutshell, electrical cars are the friends of environment, humans, and economies.
4 okt. 2023 17:24
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Technological advancements have grown rapidly in the past few years, and countless new inventions have been made to facilitate our lives, including electric cars. In my opinion, electric cars are an excellent invention for many reasons. To begin with, electric cars have a positive impact on the environment, and they are considered environmentally friendly par excellence because they don’t produce exhaust fumes. Moreover, as this invention contributes to decreasing air pollution, it is beneficial to our health. Besides, these cars don’t need petroleum and consequently, they are economical because the sources of electricity are more available and cheaper than petroleum. In a nutshell, electrical cars are the friends of the most important environment, humans, and economies.
5 oktober 2023
Technological advancements have grown rapidly in the past few years, and there are countless of new inventions that are made to facilitate our life, including electrical cars. (better: that are made to facilitate our life. Among these is the electric car). In my opinion, the electrical car is an excellent invention for many reasons. To begin with, electrical cars have a positive impact on environment, and they are considered as environmentally friendly par excellence, because they don’t produce exhaust fumes. Moreover, as this invention contributes to decreasing the air pollution (better: contributes to a decrease in air pollution), it is beneficial to our health. In addition, these cars don’t need petrol (American: gasoline) and consequently, they are economical because the sources of electricity are more available and cheaper than petroleum. In a nutshell, electrical cars are the friends of the environment, humans, and economies.
4 oktober 2023
Technology has advanced rapidly in the past few years, and there are countless new inventions that make our lives easier. (New sentence - the first sentence was getting too long). One of the most important of these is the electric car. In my opinion, electric cars are an excellent invention for many reasons. To begin with, electric cars have a positive impact on the environment, and they are considered as environmentally friendly par excellence, because they don’t produce exhaust fumes. Moreover, as this invention contributes to decreasing air pollution, it is beneficial to our health. Also/in addition/furthermore these cars don’t need petroleum products (or FOSSIL FUELS) and consequently, they are economical since/as sources of electricity are more available and cheaper than petroleum. In a nutshell, electrical cars are the friends of the environment, humans, and economies.
Generally is ELECTRIC cars, not ELECTRICAL. Either THE CAR or CARS; not THE CARS. BESIDES is used in a specific way, not just to mean AND. ENVIRONMENT needs an article. Weird, I know, since NATURE does not need an article. Nice job!
5 oktober 2023
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