Impressive!  Here are the clarifications:
22:21 where commuters drank off to get a decent buzz going, told dirt jokes
and chain smoked
24:00 Jewish American Princesses (JAP's) is a derogatory term toward young
Jewish American women.  They tend to be spoiled, rich and self-indulgent.
 White fish is a description of a Jewish fish called Gefilte, most nonJews
consider it disgusting.
24:16 tumbled off the big white couch
24:42 I did not dare pony up to the bar
24:47 weary metro north crew

26:08  I mulled it over and told her I think it was a kind of bad mojo
26:30 discretely got me that beer
26:33 it was like a divination marathon
27:00 in a voice an octave lower than my own
27:35 I felt like I had cracked a code
31:52 maintaining eye contact is the key to being a mystic, but I could
not even meet his gaze
32:55 he shook his head and glared me with red swollen eyes
33: 54 to a white clapboard colonial
34:20 adults had problems that I could not begin to fathom

I  have just listened to the act. Although I could basically understand the story in the fist time listening, there are some words I still could not get after the second time. I typed them either in made-up spellings or suspension points. Hope you have time to help me correct. Thanks millions of times.

Here is a new installment.  I think you will enjoy this short but hilarious story.  Feel free to post your specific questions.  I will try to answer them.   Don't forget to select the left most button, (Free) when downloading.

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我刚刚是了。从这边没问题下载。你能具体了解释？