Our Hitchhiking Tale
One year ago, my wife and I wanted to go hitchhiking. It would be our first time, we were in Buenos Aires, Argentina, and both of us were excited. Our plan was to casually hitchhike until we reached Rosario, so it was not a long journey, and since we did not want to push our luck, we wanted to begin it with a shorter distance.*
It was very interesting that day, as we woke up early, and then took a train and a bus which left us near a major route. Then, we spent around 15 minutes with our thumbs out before we were able to find our first ride, who then dropped us off at a gas station further down the road before going on his way. Since we then could not find another ride, we decided to leave the station and walk down the road a bit.
Suddenly, I noticed a car that had passed us, slowed down, yet, which had not pulled off the road. While signaling with my finger to see if it would actually pull over, I joked with my wife about it, and to our surprise, it did! Once we were inside, they told us that they had actually seen us earlier on the side of the road, but that it was too late for them to stop safely, so now, they were somewhat surprised to see us there ahead of them.
It turns out that they had arrived at that point in the road after us because earlier they had quite a bit of trouble finding a gas station, which held them up. That was rather fortunate for us as they turned out to be the best riding companions, and drove us most of the rest of our journey, around 200 km. They also gave us some food, and we talked a lot about so many things.
Those tremendously courteous and hospitable men later dropped us off at another gas station before they, too, went on their way. We then were later able to catch a ride in a big truck with a very kind man, who eventually dropped us off right at Rosario’s city gate. In the end, it was quite the adventure, and we ended up having not only having an amazing experience, but also having a very good time!
<em>Hi, Josue. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.</em>
<em>*While there is nothing wrong with using the words “something small,” and the concept it conveys would probably be understood by most native speakers, as you are dealing in distance, more than size, I felt it better to use words that would make that point more clear. </em>