Please, correct my essy "Post Office or the Internet".

Post office or the Internet.

Do Post Offices should close, because now is the age of the Internet or people need in it? This is not an easy question to decide, the issue is complicated and many factors have to be considered. On the one hand, we still are needed in Post Offices, but on the other hand, we more and more use the Internet. But I think that Post Offices should not close and I have some reason on it.

Firs of all, it is opinion of other people which I asked about it. All of them agree with me, and some of them also said that take usual letter nicer than email in the Internet.

Second, Post offices provide a lot of different services, such as to send letters or parcels, remittances, payment of pensions and benefits, to settle accounts or pay for the Internet and television, magazines or newspapers distribution for subscribers and even Post Offices provide so interesting service like greetings by Ded Moroz.

Of course, a lot of people can say that the most part of it people can do with help pf the Internet, for instance, send letters, but, for example, even if you buy something in the Internet your purchase will deliver to you with help Post Office. Also many big companies like Avon use Post Offices for delivery theirs productions to buyers.

The third reason is a lot of old people do not know how to use the Internet and do not have computers, because of it they still are needed in Post Office and do not forget that they get pension in Post Offices. The Internet can not do it.

And the last reason is that Post Offices provide a lot of workplaces. It is good for economics of country.

To sum up, I want to say that if the Internet can substitute usual letters for virtual communication it can not take the place of other services. And until all people have the Internet Post Offices should not close.

Please, correct my essy "Post Office or the Internet".

Post office or the Internet.

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FirsT of all, it is THE opinion of other people which I asked about it all of them agreeD with me, and some of them also said that take usual letter nicer than email <strike>in </strike> ON the Internet.

Second, Post offices provide a lot of different services, such as to send letters or parcels, remittances, payment of pensions and benefits, to settle accounts or pay for the Internet and television, magazines or newspapers distribution for subscribers and even Post Offices provide so interesting service like greetings by Ded Moroz.

Of course, a lot of people can say that the most part of it people can do with help OF the Internet, for instance, send letters, but, for example, even if you buy something <strike>in</strike>  ON the Internet your purchaseD ITEM will BE deliverED to you with THE help OF Post Office. Also many big companies like Avon use Post Offices for delivery theirs <strike>productions</strike>  PRODUCTS to buyers.

The third reason is a lot of old people do not know how to use the Internet and do not have computers, because of it they still NEED <strike>are needed in</strike> Post OfficeS and do not forget that they get pension in Post Offices. The Internet can not do it.

And the last reason is that Post Offices provide a lot of workplaces. It is good for <strike>economics</strike> ECONOMY of THE country.

To sum up, I want to say that if the Internet can substitute usual letters for virtual communication it can not take the place of other services. And until all people have the Internet THEREFORE, Post Offices should not BE closeD.