#204 Could you help me correct this text? Every day, I’ve checked the exchange rate between dollars and yen since this spring. The weaker yen tends going rapidly for last twenty years. It comes to thi

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13 jun. 2022 03:39

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#204 Could you help me correct this text? Every day, I’veI’ve been checkeding the exchange rate between dthe US Dollars and yenthe Japanese Yen everyday since this spring. The weaker yYen tends goingto rapidly fordecrease compared to the US Dollar since the last twenty years. It comes toBecause of this, it is getting hard to go abroad from Japan. Personally, I’mit makes me very sad and have a big sighI can't help sighing when thinking about it.

13 juni 2022

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Thank you for correcting my post which sounds more natural:).

13 juni 2022 · Antwoord

Lauren

#204 Could you help me correct this text? Every day, I’ve checked the exchange rate between dollars and yen since this spring. The weaker yen tendsyen is weaker and has been going down rapidly for the last twenty years. It has comes to this,e point where it is getting hard to go abroad from Japan. Personally, I’m very sad and have alet out big sigh.

It’s good!! Weaker yen, grammatically correct but made a conjunction since the yen being weaker and the yen going down rapidly are two different concepts. “It has come to this” does mean the result of a situation but usually used in speech as a surprise or an declaration. “It has come to the point/reached the point” works better in essay writing. Last sentence I’m not sure about the sigh part whether it was a feeling or you actually sighed.

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13 juni 2022

Turá

Thank you very much for your correction and detailed explanation, Linda!:) As for last sentences, I wanted to refer the feeling of disappointment, and l can’t help sighing for that.

13 juni 2022 · Antwoord

Matt |马特 |Mateo

#204 Could you help me correct this text? Every day, I’ve checked the exchange rate between dollars and yen since this spring. The weaker yen tends going rapidly for last twenty years. It comes tothe US dollar (USD) and Japanese yen since this spring. Over the past twenty years, the yen has been rapidly declining in value. Because of this, it is getting harder to gotravel abroad from Japan. Personally, I’m very sad and have a big sighit makes me sad.

There is more than one kind of dollar in the world, so you should specify which currency you are comparing

13 juni 2022

Turá

That’s certainly true! l was supposing the USD and the CAD. Thank you very much for your correction, Matt!:)

13 juni 2022 · Antwoord

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