Kailin
Is it okay to say "I pride myself on being calm and level-headed......" in an interview? This is a verbal self-introduction I wrote for an interview. Please point out the mistakes I made or somewhere I wrote wrong or strange, or just how you feel about it. Thank you! I pride myself on being calm and level-headed. You can always see me smiling. I think nothing can be solved unless you have a cool head. Call me a perfectionist if you fancy. I sometimes drive my teammates mad, but I think perfectionism is a good thing. Nothing can be perfect, but at least you should try to do your best. Another treat out of me is my cooperative attitude as well as a sense of responsibility. The sense of duty for myself pushes me to try my best in all fields while the sense of duty for my team drives me to care for each of my teammates and bring out the best of our ability through teamwork. Thanks again~
16 jun. 2014 07:58
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I've made a few suggestions below (in brackets), but have tried not to change your text too much: I pride myself on being calm and level-headed. You can always see me smiling. I think nothing can be solved unless you have a cool head. (Some people call me a perfectionist). I sometimes drive my teammates mad, but I think perfectionism is a good thing. Nothing can be perfect, but at least you should try to do your best. Another (of my positive qualities) is my cooperative attitude, as well as (my) sense of responsibility. (My) sense of duty (towards my work) pushes me to try my best in all fields, while (my) sense of duty (towards) my team drives me to care for each of my teammates and bring out the best of our ability through teamwork.
16 juni 2014
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