I love a car and I would like to think that I have tried to take a good care of my beloved car. I came across an interesting article online about an essential maintenance for car's long-use and would

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I love a car and I would like to think that I have tried to take a good care of my beloved car. I came across an interesting article online about an essential maintenance for car's long-use and would like to share it here. It is said that the best timing to exchange a car is from 7 to 9 years on average in the case of what you bought it as a brand new one. That's because some of their parts will be discontinued in the future and some related taxes will increase in Japan if you have had it for over 13 years. However, you generally can use it over 20 years depending on your maintenance. In other word, your poor-maintenance-conscious might deteriorate your beloved car quickly. So, the article said essential maintenances are as follows 1) The exchange of oils on a regular basis, such as an engine oil and an engine coolant water called "Long Life Coolant". 2) The exchange of consumables on a regular basis, such as tires, air elements, brake pads, batteries and so on. 3) The exchange of rubber boots such as suspension dust boots, dry shaft boots and so on. 4) The exchange of suspension related parts such as dampers, mounts arms and so on. 5) The exchange of brake related parts such as brake pads, disc rotors and so on. Probably, I'm not going to have my beloved car over 20 years, but I think making a point of good maintenance is better safe than sorry. So, I'll follow the instruction above in the future.

30 mar 2025 06:12

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Editor Anna 安娜編輯

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30 mar 2025 08:08

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tatsukiEditor Anna 安娜編輯

Hi Anna, thank you for your correction. I learned a lot from you!

30 mar 2025 09:02 · Odpowiedź

Editor Anna 安娜編輯tatsuki

You're very welcome, Tatsuki

30 mar 2025 09:05 · Odpowiedź

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1. “I love a car” → “I love cars” • “I love a car” sounds unnatural. If you’re talking about cars in general, use “I love cars.” If referring to a specific car, say, “I love my car.” 2. “I would like to think that I have tried to take a good care” → “I like to think that I have taken good care” • “Tried to take a good care” is awkward. “Taken good care” is the correct phrase. 3. “An essential maintenance” → “Essential maintenance” • “Maintenance” is uncountable, so “an” is unnecessary. 4. “For car’s long-use” → “For a car’s long-term use” • “Long-use” is incorrect; “long-term use” is the right phrase. 5. “The best timing to exchange a car” → “The best time to replace a car” • “Timing” is usually used for events, and “exchange” is incorrect here. “Replace” is the appropriate word. 6. “In the case of what you bought it as a brand new one” → “If you bought it brand new” • The original phrasing is unnatural; “if you bought it brand new” is more natural. 7. “Depending on your maintenance” → “With proper maintenance” • “Depending on your maintenance” is awkward; “with proper maintenance” sounds more natural. 8. “In other word” → “In other words” • The correct phrase is “In other words” (plural). 9. “Your poor-maintenance-conscious” → “Poor maintenance habits” • “Poor-maintenance-conscious” is incorrect English. “Poor maintenance habits” is the correct way to express this idea. 10. “Essential maintenances are as follows” → “The article outlined essential maintenance steps as follows” • “Maintenance” is uncountable, so “maintenances” is incorrect. 11. Rewriting the maintenance list for clarity and correctness • “The exchange of oils on a regular basis” → “Regular oil changes” • “Such as an engine oil and an engine coolant water” → “Such as engine oil and engine coolant” • “Exchange of consumables” → “Regular replacement of consumable parts” • “Air elements” → “Air filters” (more natural term) 12. “Making a point of good maintenance is better saf

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30 mar 2025 11:43

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Hi Shahd, thank you for your correction.

30 mar 2025 23:50 · Odpowiedź

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