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Today I want write the city where I live: Edinburgh 🙂 This city it have good and bat like all place. i want write the it good. Is a city architecturally beautiful for me eyes. I loves look seagulls fly for the sky the city. This bird I loves because me remember the main character the me favorite book. I loves the music to Scotland. The sound of the bagpipes for my is wonderful. The typical dance Scottish is very happy. it’s like a happy children’s dance. This is one of my favorite dances. I will take a good memory of this small city. ( The photo don’t honor to the beauty of the city) Thanks for correcting me đŸ™đŸœ
10 mar 2021 09:28
Poprawki · 3
Today I want write the city where I live: Edinburgh 🙂 This city *has good and bad ike all places.* I want *to* write *about the* good. *The city is architecturally beautiful in my eyes.* *I love to watch seagulls fly in the city's sky.* *I love this bird because it reminds of the main character of my favorite book.* I *love* the music *of* Scotland. *To me, the sound of the bagpipes is wonderful.* The typical dance Scottish is very happy. It’s like a happy children’s dance. This is one of my favorite dances. I will take a good memory of this small city *with me*. ( The photo *doesn't* honor the beauty of the city) Thanks for correcting me đŸ™đŸœ
Well done!
10 marca 2021
Today I want write the city where I live: Edinburgh 🙂 This city it have good and bat like all place. i want write the it good. Is a city architecturally beautiful for me eyes. I loves look seagulls fly for the sky the city. This bird I loves because me remember the main character the me favorite book. I loves the music to Scotland. The sound of the bagpipes for my is wonderful. The typical dance Scottish is very happy. it’s like a happy children’s dance. This is one of my favorite dances. I will take a good memory of this small city. ( The photo don’t honor to the beauty of the city) Thanks for correcting me đŸ™đŸœ
Parece que algunas de mis correcciones no sobrevivieron este formateo ridĂ­culo :(
10 marca 2021
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