Est-er
Today has been a pretty boring and disheartening day. I have not discovered yet the accurate cause. It just feels like something is amiss. Maybe because I haven’t seen my beloved ones for a long time, or maybe it may be just out of the absence of sun. Yeah, today there’s no sun at all, a really unexpected event to see. The city where I work is a very sunny place, every pedestrian in this city has already been sun bronzed and out of breath on summer days. Therefore, it really is a mysterious phenomenon, maybe the warming globe effect has already reached the city. But out of all the reasons, the sun was missed a lot, or maybe not.
19 mar 2025 17:37
Poprawki · 3
Today has been a pretty boring and disheartening day. I have not discovered yet the exact reason why. It just feels like something is (has been) amiss. Maybe because I haven’t seen my loved ones for a long time, or maybe it may be just because of a lack of sun. Yeah, today there’s (been) no sun at all, a really unexpected event to see. The city where I work is a very sunny place, every pedestrian in this city has already become sun-tanned and out of breath (?) on summer days. Therefore, it really is a mysterious phenomenon, maybe the global warming effect has already reached the city. But out of all the reasons, the sun was missed a lot, or maybe not. Well done Ester. A nice piece of writing. I hope my corrections help. And I totally get you, I suffer badly on cloudy days too. Teacher Simon
19 mar 2025 18:06
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