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A problem-solution essay - Please check it! Environmental awareness - A problem-solution essay. "Save our planet", "Go Green", "Think Green" these and other slogans are well-known for everyone. But not everyone want to spend a while to think about them. But numbers say it all. Eighty percent - that's a number of virgin forests which were destroyed in 20th century. More than fifty percent rivers are polluted. Plastic rubbish claim 1 million birds, a 100 thousand sea mammals and an enormous amount of fishes every year. And this represents a very big and still growing problem. One of the leading causes of air pollution are the motor vehicle and aircraft emissions. Fumes from paint, hair spray and other sprays may also make the air affected. Due to industrial and radioactive weste, oil pollution, underground storage leakages or marine dumping the water are polluted. Pollutions are harmful to the health of humans and animals. They can affect the health in short- and long-term effects. Air pollution may be cause if irritation to the eyes, nose and throat. But the contamination of air also can bring other diseases like chronic respiratory disease, lung cancer, heart disease and even damage to the brain. Industrial waste often contains many toxic compounds which damage the health of aquatic animals and those who eat them. There are a number of possible solutions. People could make a lot to fight against enviromental pollution for example reduce electricity and water usage. They may use public transport instead of drive a car. Walking or biking could also be good not only for the environment but for the health, too. The main aim of this essay was to made people aware of today's very important problem which is environmental pollution. Because a behaviour of every single person has matter for everyone. And if we don't do anything than who does?

22 sty 2013 23:56

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A problem-solution essay - Please check it!

Environmental awareness - A problem-solution essay.

"Save our planet", "Go Green", "Think Green" these and other slogans are well-known to everyone. But not everyone wants to spend time thinking about them.
But numbers say it all. Eighty percent - that's the number of virgin forests which were destroyed in the 20th century. More than fifty percent of rivers are polluted. Plastic rubbish claim 1 million birds, a 100 thousand (one hundred thousand, or, 100,000) sea mammals and an enormous amount of fishes every year. And This represents a very big, and still growing, problem.

One of the leading causes of air pollution are the motor vehicle and aircraft emissions. Fumes from paint, hair spray and other sprays may also make the air affected. Due to industrial and radioactive waste, oil pollution, underground storage leakages or marine dumping the water is polluted.

Pollutions are harmful to the health of humans and animals. They can affect the health in short and long-term effects.
Air pollution may be the cause of irritation to the eyes, nose and throat. But the contamination of air also can bring other diseases like chronic respiratory disease, lung cancer, heart disease and even damage to the brain.
Industrial waste often contains many toxic compounds which damage the health of aquatic animals and those who eat them.

There are a number of possible solutions. People could make a lot to fight against enviromental pollution, for example reduce electricity and water usage. (To acheive this aim) They may use public transport instead of drive a car. Walking or biking could also be good not only for the environment but for the health, too.

The main aim of this essay was to made people aware of today's very important problem which is environmental pollution. Because a behaviour of every single person has consequence for everyone. And if we don't do anything than who does?