Schools kill creativity by Ken Robinson. Correct my essay, please!

The main issue in the modern world. Every world, is that every child goes to school every day.

There he learns a lot of subjects and do does many exercises. But what about his hobbies? For

example, what if he wants to be become a famous artist, singer, actor and so on.? Why didn’t he

enough time to do what he wants? He won't have enough time to do what he wants.

Our current educational system is a product of twenty-century industrialism. It is a model with a

limited focus on specific subjects. School, by nature, is not a creative environment. Therefore, the

system rewards good information seekers and punishes creative outside-the-box students. They

breed students to past test pass tests rather than teaching them how to critically think on the

subject and form a new, innovative idea from it new, innovative ideas. Instead of allowing our

students to become innovative thinkers, our school system mercilessly sucks creativity from them. I

think, it is not fairly I don't think that this is fair. Ken Robinson once said, “Many highly talented, brilliant, creative people

think they’re not — because the thing they were good at at school wasn’t valued, or was actually

stigmatized.” – by Ken Robinson. I absolutely agree. with it.

The only classes that ever allowed for any creativity were art and music (and sometimes woodshop).

But However, so much time spent much more time is spent teaching classes such as history classes and English grammar. I think, it wasn’t useful for

students I think that these aren't as useful to students. They needed to have more practice on each subject in a wider variety of subject matter. “There isn’t an education system on

the planet that teaches dance every day to children the way we teach them mathematics. Why?” - by asks Ken Robinson.

In my opinion, school kills creativity. But However, an educated person always find a way to do the his or her best. He

got a will attain higher education and find a good job. Clever Intellectually curious people always try to discover something new for

them are always eager to learn and experience new things. , to learn a new language , to got a very experience for their life. So, as Keb Robinson said, “Curiosity is the engine of

achievement.” – by Ken Robinson, and I think so.