Etsuko
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I will attend futasal game on Saturday. I like playing futsal. I'm not a good player yet, but playing with friends is fun for me.
14 gru 2021 23:47
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I will attend a futsal game on Saturday. I like playing futsal. I'm not a good player yet, but playing with friends is fun for me. - I'm going to a futsal game on Saturday. (You could also say "I'm going to be playing in a futsal game on Saturday", if that information is correct.) I love playing futsal and, even though I'm not a good player yet, I still really like playing it with my friends. *This version is an alternative that could make your writing seem more natural.
Well done, Etsuko. Your writing is very clear and mostly accurate too. You'll notice that I've made some suggestions that could improve your writing. Please have a look at them and let me know if you have any further questions. All the best with your English learning! Kind regards, Joshua
15 grudnia 2021
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I will attend a futsal game on Saturday. I like playing futsal. I'm not a good player yet, but playing with friends is fun for me.
Sounds fun and it keeps you fit too! :)
15 grudnia 2021
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I am going to attend a futsal game on Saturday. I like playing futsal. I'm not a good player yet, but playing with friends is fun for me.
Good! If you "attend" a game I think you will be a spectator, not a player. If you are going to be a player, you can say "I am going to play in a futsal game on Saturday." I had never heard of "futsal" before. It sounds interesting. You usually say "I'm going to" instead of "I will" when discussing plans.
15 grudnia 2021
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