wendy
I think that nobady wants to be busy after a long week's work. We really like to sleep in on saturdays' morning, but most of us usually get up asusual on weekeds due to the chores, breakfasts or other endless things until lunch time. After preparing lunch and doing the dishes, children may come over and ask you to take them out for fun. When dinner time is coming, we often feel tried of choosing what food should we eat. When children have fallen asleep by 11p.m, we have been exhausted. In fact, it's not my real life. On weekends, I get up as usual, my children won't sleep in, but help me do the chores. We spend a hour cleaning our home. We do groceries and prepare meals together. They finish their homework after lunch. We do some interesting soprts in parks until we are sweaty. We feel very relaxed after going home. After enjoy a big dinner meal, we read,sing or dance until feel tired, then we go to bed in a good mood! It's my great weeked!
29 lis 2024 08:38
Poprawki · 1
Do you keep busy or relax on the weekend? I think nobody really wants to stay busy after a long week of work. Most of us like to sleep in on Saturday mornings, but often end up getting up as usual because of chores, preparing breakfast, or handling other endless tasks until lunchtime. After making lunch and doing the dishes, children might ask to go out for some fun. When dinnertime approaches, we often feel tired from deciding what to eat. By the time the kids fall asleep around 11 p.m., we're completely exhausted. But that's not my real life! On weekends, I wake up at my usual time. My children don’t sleep in either; instead, they help me with the chores. We spend about an hour cleaning the house together. Then, we do the grocery shopping and prepare meals as a team. After lunch, the kids finish their homework. Later, we enjoy some fun sports in the park, running around until we’re sweaty and happy. When we get home, we feel relaxed. After a big, delicious dinner, we spend time reading, singing, or dancing together until we’re tired. Then, we go to bed feeling happy and content. That’s my idea of a perfect weekend!
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29 listopada 2024
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