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There are two indigenous tribes in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say The Ainu language is almost extinct. So I will introduce The Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people occupied Northeast japan. According to the Ainu culture website, its history is so complicated and uncertain, but it was established in the 12 and 13 centuries. They have a unique culture; they mainly worked as hunters. And They believe that everything has got in their inside. The language is pretty different from Japanese. And people who speak Ainu are almost extinct. Because people were getting older, and the people only spoke the Ainu language, it was tough to get jobs. The people started to learn another language; it is easier to forget their language. Despite the fact we can't choose our nationality, the minority rice is sacrificed a lot. Such as prejudice. It is said that the Ainu people still exist. They can speak the Ainu language, but they hide. Because they didn't feel an advantage in speaking the Ainu language. But If we have a lot of things to learn from another culture. In Hokkaido Therer a few musiam related with Ainu culture.
30 maj 2022 01:36
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There are two indigenous tribes in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say The Ainu language is almost extincted. So I will introduce The Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people occupied Northeast Japan. According to the Ainu culture website, it's history is so complicated and uncertain, but it was established in the 12 and 13 centuries. They have a unique culture; they mainly worked as hunters. And They believe that everything has got in their inside. The language is pretty different from Japanese. And people who speak Ainu are almost extincted. Because people were getting older, and the only way they spoke the Ainu language was, though to get jobs. (Sorry I didn't understand this part if you can write in Japanese for me it would be great 😊) Then, they started to learn another language; doing so their native language would be forgotten easily. Despite the fact we that can't choose our nationality, the minority rice is sacrificed a lot. Such as prejudice. It is said that the Ainu people still exist. They can speak the Ainu language, but they hide. Because they didn't feel an advantage in speaking the Ainu language. But If we have a lot of things to learn from another culture. In Hokkaido There a few museums related to Ainu culture.
You have been able to write longer posts. Good job ! 😉
30 maja 2022
There are two indigenous tribes in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say The Ainu language is almost extinct. So I will introduce The Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people occupied the Northeast (region) of Japan. According to the Ainu culture's website, its history is complicated and uncertain, but it was established in/around the 12th and/or 13th centuries. They have a unique culture. In the past, they were mainly hunters and they still believe today that everything has a god/a deity inside of it (or: "everything is inhabited by a god"). The Ainu's language is pretty different from Japanese and people who speak Ainu are almost extinct because there population is getting older. People who only speak the Ainu language have a lot of difficulties to find a job. When people start to learn another language; it is easier for them to forget their mother tongue (I suppose this is what you meant). Despite the fact we can't choose our nationality, the minority's rice(culture?) is often sacrificed, which is such as prejudice (shame?). It is said that the Ainu people still exist, they can speak the Ainu language but they hide because speaking their native language would not grant them any advantages. However, we have a lot of things to learn from other cultures. In Hokkaido there are a few museums related/dedicated to Ainu's culture.
I don’t think the Ainu people were believing in God as the Christians do, in polytheists cults (with many gods in their belief system) you don’t put a capital “G” to the word god because there are many of them. You tend to use the past sometimes where you should use the present, if you were talking about a totally extinct civilization (such as the Sumerian for example) then you’d have to use the past, but since Ainu people is not extinct, or at least haven’t been declared to be, you can stick to the present when talking about them. Interesting topic otherwise, good work.
30 maja 2022
There are two indigenous peoples in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say the Ainu language is almost extinct. So I will introduce the Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people are native to northeast Japan. According to the Ainu culture website, their history is so complicated and uncertain, but it was established in the twelfth and thirteenth centuries. They have a unique culture; they used to mainly work as hunters. And they believe that everything has a spirit. The language is pretty different from Japanese. And people who speak Ainu are almost extinct. Because people were getting older, and they only spoke the Ainu language, it was tough to get jobs. So they started to learn Japanese and it became easier to forget their language. Despite the fact that we can't choose our nationality or ethnicity, minorities are sacrificed a lot. For example, they endure prejudice. Ainu people still exist. They can speak the Ainu language, but they hide it because it doesn't benefit them. But we have a lot of things to learn from another culture. In Hokkaido there are a few museums related to Ainu culture.
Very good writing practice! 🙂 "it was established in the 12 and 13 centuries." Do you mean that the first historical documentation of the Ainu people appeared in the twelfth and thirteenth centuries? / "It is said that the Ainu people still exist". >> "it is said" gives the impression that it is not a confirmed fact. / "occupy" >> One meaning of "occupy" is "to enter a place in a large group and take control of it, especially by military force". However, the Ainu are indigineous, so this meaning of "occupy" would not apply to them. I recommend saying "The Ainu people are native to..."
1 czerwca 2022
There are two indigenous tribes in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say The Ainu language is almost extinct. So I will introduce The Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people occupied Northeast japan. According to the Ainu culture website, its history is so complicated and uncertain, but it was established in the 12 and 13 centuries. They have a unique culture; they mainly worked as hunters. And They believe that everything has got in their inside. The language is pretty different from Japanese. And people who speak Ainu are almost extinct. Because people were getting older, and the people only spoke the Ainu language, it was tough to get jobs. The people started to learn another language; it is easier to forget their language. Despite the fact we can't choose our nationality, the minority rice is sacrificed a lot. Such as prejudice. It is said that the Ainu people still exist. They can speak the Ainu language, but they hide. Because they didn't feel an advantage in speaking the Ainu language. But If we have a lot of things to learn from another culture. In Hokkaido Therer a few musiam related with Ainu culture. hello can we practice together?
30 maja 2022
There are two indigenous tribes in Japan named the Ainu and the Okinawans. Some people say The Ainu language is almost extinct. So I will introduce The Ainu culture and its language. The Ainu people occupied Northeast japan. According to the Ainu culture website, its history is so complicated and uncertain, but it was established in the 12 and 13 centuries. They have a unique culture; they mainly worked as hunters. And They believe that everything has God in their inside. The language is pretty different from Japanese. And people who speak Ainu are almost extinct. Because people were getting older, and the people only spoke the Ainu language, it was tough to get jobs. The people started to learn another language; it is easier to forget their language. Despite the fact we can't choose our nationality, the minority rice is sacrificed a lot. Such as prejudice. It is said that the Ainu people still exist. They can speak the Ainu language, but they hide. Because they didn't feel an advantage in speaking the Ainu language. However, we have a lot of things to learn from another culture. In Hokkaido Therer a few musiam related with Ainu culture.
30 maja 2022
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