Can you correct the passage?
I wrote a passage for exam. Can you correct it after the topic?
・write an essay on the given TOPIC.
・Give Three reasons to support your answer.
・Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
・Suggested length: 200-240 words
Topic
Should democratic nations actively promote the spread of democracy to nondemocratic nations?
Recently, a lot of nations struggle to install democracy into their countries themselves. Some of them have achieved the process and the other still have a nag to distribute the thought. I will address three main notions against this statement.
At an onset of the discussion, democracy is not perfect regime type all over the world and it is just a plausible one in humankind history. Even if France which is the first country to install it took over five decades. Moreover, Brazil originally started democracy, however, Brazil came back to military tyranny. In the historical fact, I cannot say that democracy is the best regime type.
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