How to calculate such a thing can cause you a headache resulting in inflammation of the grey cells and worse. Insomnia, lack of appetite, endless boredom and the like, could also be manifested. Be a

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How to calculate such a thing can cause you a headache resulting in inflammation of the grey cells and worse. Insomnia, lack of appetite, endless boredom and the like, could also be manifested. Be aware!

10 paź 2024 19:09

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10 paź 2024 21:10

Calculating such a thing can cause you a headache resulting in inflammation of the grey cells or worse. Insomnia, lack of appetite, endless boredom and the like, could also be manifested. Be aware!

I just edited the sentence so it flows better. It emphasizes the result of the headache and it’s symptoms instead of the act of calculating. It wasn’t wrong how you worded it, it just sounds more natural using the gerund to establish the cause of the headache.

14 paź 2024 10:48

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