Hojjat
My first writing! People nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are more important in addition to good qualification for job success. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. Many individuals believe that social skills are becoming more and more important nowadays and it is become necessary profession for being successful in finding job or even in workplaces. Even though some people who their jobs is based on contacting with others, needs to work on their social skills, I personally disagree that everybody need to have an excellent social skill to be success in their profession. Thanks to fast and marvelous progress in technology and vast range of job applicant that industries need them nowadays, I think individuals must effort to increase their profession in their special field instead of working on different abilities. For instance, when a web developer is going to be employed in a high-tech company, he/she just should be able to design a perfect website and he is not expected to have special social skills for contacting with costumers because some others with this skill do that much better. Furthermore, I strongly believe that in the future, best companies pay more money to someone who is more skillful in their special needed job. Therefore we should focus on our favorite skill. Some may argue that social skills are necessary for everybody communications and for employees to increase the customers of each company. However, everyone has some basic social skills and companies nowadays recruit persons that took their academic degree in this field like consultants, marketers and so on. In conclusion, thanks to some basic social skills that everyone has, I disagree with the idea that everyone needs to have high social skill to be successful in their professional field.
Apr 22, 2022 2:27 PM
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People nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are more important than good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. Many individuals believe that social skills are becoming more and more important nowadays and it is becoming necessary, professionally, to be successful in finding a job or even in workplaces. Even though some people whose jobs are based on communicating with others need to work on their social skills, I personally disagree that everybody needs to have excellent social skills to be successful in their profession. Thanks to the fast, marvelous progress in technology and the vast range of job applicants that industries need nowadays, I think individuals must make an effort to increase their profession knowledge in their special field instead of working on different abilities. For instance, when a web developer is going to be employed in a high-tech company, he/she should just be able to design a perfect website and not be expected to have special social skills for contacting customers, because some others with this skill will do that much better. Furthermore, I strongly believe that in the future, the best companies will pay more money to someone who is more skillful in their specially needed job, therefore we should focus on our favorite skill. Some may argue that social skills are necessary for everybody's communication and for employees to increase the number of customers. However, everyone has some basic social skills and companies nowadays recruit people that took their academic degree in this field like consultants, marketers and so on. In conclusion, thanks to some basic social skills that everyone has, I disagree with the idea that everyone needs to have high social skills to be successful in their professional field.
Hi Hojjat, well done. We can either write, “Social skills are more important than good qualifications”, (comparison), or “Social skills are important, in addition to good qualifications”. Note that “marvellous” with one “L” in the American spelling and “marvellous” is how most other countries write it. I’m not going to get into an argument over which is correct, but what is more important is that you need to decide who you are going to be communicating with normally and stick to one form. Just remember in the question it says: “include any relevant examples from YOUR OWN knowledge or experience.” This is really important in exams. You wrote 264 words, so that’s perfect for the word count, which again, is important in exams. Good luck.
April 22, 2022
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