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Practice paragraph- walks 我非常喜欢散步。在我大学有多漂亮的树木。在我看它们的时候,我觉得很高兴。就是天气很冷,我也喜欢散步看树木。在我散步的时候,我听法语音乐和中文音乐和英文音乐。这是我最喜欢的定例。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks!
18 de nov de 2020 05:29
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Practice paragraph- walks 我喜欢,在校园中散步。那的大树令人赏心悦目。每当我走进这片净土,清新会沁入我身体每寸肌肤。初冬,千叶渐枯,不减我寻雅之心如初。漫步,漫步,伴东西乐舞,此谓吾心之渡。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks!
Deeply modified , :p first part like a modern poem , second part like a light ancient poetry
18 de novembro de 2020
Practice paragraph- walks 我非常喜欢散步。我在大学时,那儿有很多漂亮的树木。当我看到它们的时候,我感到很高兴。即使天气很冷,我也喜欢散步及看那些树木。在我散步的时候,我会听法语、汉语或是英语的音乐。这就是我最喜欢的日常。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks! I guess maybe you have many problems again.lol.
18 de novembro de 2020
Practice paragraph- walks 我非常喜欢散步。在我大学里有多漂亮的树木。当我看它们的时候,我觉得非常高兴。即使天气很冷,我也很喜欢散步来看这些树木。在我散步的时候,我听法语歌、中文歌和英文歌。这是我最喜欢的习惯。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks!
19 de novembro de 2020
Practice paragraph- walks 我非常喜欢散步。在我大学里有很多漂亮的树木。当我看它们的时候,我觉得很高兴。即使(就算)天气很冷,我也喜欢散步看树木。在我散步的时候,我会听法语音乐和中文音乐和英文音乐。这是我最喜欢的日常生活。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks!
我最后一句话不知道怎么翻译,我感觉中文没有对应的话
19 de novembro de 2020
Practice paragraph- walks 我非常喜欢散步。我的大学有多漂亮的树木。每当我看到它们的时候,我都觉得很高兴。即使天气很冷,我也喜欢去散步和看那些树木。在我散步的时候,我会听法语音乐、中文音乐和英文音乐。这是我日常生活中最喜欢的部分。 I really like to take walks. At my university there are many pretty trees. When I see them, I feel happy. Even if the weather is cold, I still like to take a walk and see the trees. While I walk, I listen to French music, Chinese music, and English music. This is my favorite routine. Thanks!
18 de novembro de 2020
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