The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy with preparing the programs for celebrating the festival. So does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsal

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The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy with preparing the programs for celebrating the festival. So does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals ，everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They’d like to show their best side in front of the leaders and others. The gala is scheduled tomorrow. I hope everyone can be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

15 de jan de 2025 07:50

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Dan

The spring festival is approaching, a. Almost every company is busy with preparing their programs for celebrating the festival. So does oOur company. Now o is preparing as well. Our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals ，e. Everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They’d like want to show their best side in front of the leaders and others. The gala is scheduled for tomorrow. I hope everyone canwill be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

DOES does not match the previou sentence, so "SO DOES . . . etc" doesn't work. Don't connect separate ideas with a commas. They should be separate sentences, unless you make a meaningful connection between then with a conjuction.

16 de jan de 2025 07:02

Pierre

Professor Profissional

The spring festival is approaching, almost every company is busy with preparing the programs for celebrating the festival. Sir celebration programs and so does our company. Now our colleagues are in the midst of intense rehearsals ，and everyone is enthusiastic and energetic. They’d like to show their best side in front ofto their leaders and othercolleagues. The gala is scheduled for tomorrow. I hope everyone canwill be satisfied with their performances and bring happiness to each other.

15 de jan de 2025 10:51

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