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Yuma
About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down!
15 de jun de 2022 12:19
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Kai Aoel 凯
Tutor da Comunidade
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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, wWe went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down!
Good job, Yuma. I want to go visit Taiwan again too :)
16 de junho de 2022
Yuma
Thank you for your correcting! Taiwan is a wonderful place!
16 de junho de 2022 · Responda
Kai Aoel 凯Yuma
It is, isn't it? Have you been to places other than Taipei and its surroundings? :)
16 de junho de 2022 · Responda
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Pierre
Professor Profissional
About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. I remember it was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places., I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation/pandemic settles down!
Good work. Let's hope we can put this pandemic behind us soon.
15 de junho de 2022
Yuma
Thank you for the correcting!
15 de junho de 2022 · Responda
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Mark Edgar Witzmann
Professor Profissional
About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It which was my first trip abroad. In TaiwanThere, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Ccoronavirus situation settles down!
Well written. Try use relative clauses to make your sentences longer. I can show you how to write complex sentences. Your English is good and it is an easy lesson for you. It will help your English develop more. Take care.
15 de junho de 2022
Yuma
Thank you for the advice!
15 de junho de 2022 · Responda
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