I plan to send this email to a dermatologist I saw on Tik Tok to find out how to take better care of my facial skin. I would really appreciate it if you could correct any errors in my email.

Good morning,
I wanted to get some advice on my facial skin care. I have sensitive and acne-prone skin. What products do you recommend for such skin? I still have a question, should I exfoliate it? If so, please tell me how, as I have not used any peels, acids or retinol so far. Of the creams, I use la roche posay effaclar h iso biome on a daily basis and Bioderma sebium sensitive on the recommendation of my dermatologist. I have also been using Anua Heartleaf tonic for a long time and would like to change it. I've been thinking about TirTir milk toner and buying a serum from Caudalie Vinoperfect. She uses keracnyl gel to cleanse her face. Redness appears on the face, with occasional pimples.
My skin is showing off mainly in the T-zone.
Do you have any recommendations or tips for looking after my skin type? I would appreciate your reply in advance and thank you very much for your advice.

Question

I plan to send this email to a dermatologist I saw on Tik Tok to find out how to take better care of my facial skin. I would really appreciate it if you could correct any errors in my email.

Good morning, 
I wanted to get some advice on my facial skin care. I have sensitive and acne-prone skin. What products do you recommend for such skin? I still have a question, should I exfoliate it? If so, please tell me how, as I have not used any peels, acids or retinol so far. Of the creams, I use la roche posay effaclar h iso biome on a daily basis and Bioderma sebium sensitive on the recommendation of my dermatologist. I have also been using Anua Heartleaf tonic for a long time and would like to change it. I've been thinking about TirTir milk toner and buying a serum from Caudalie Vinoperfect. She uses keracnyl gel to cleanse her face. Redness appears on the face, with occasional pimples.
My skin is showing off mainly in the T-zone. 
Do you have any recommendations or tips for looking after my skin type? I would appreciate your reply in advance and thank you very much for your advice.

Answer

This all looks good, apart from two small points:

1. Instead of saying ‘I still have a question’, you can say: ‘One further question’ (polite) or ‘I have another question’ (everyday).

If you say ‘I still have a question’, it implies you already asked the same question previously, but the other person hasn’t yet answered this point, so it could seem a little impolite or odd to say that here, as you are asking a second question.

2. It’s technically correct to say ‘Can you tell me how to take care of…’ but again it could seem a little impolite or strong, because ‘tell’ is a strong, direct word. It would be nicer to say: ‘Please could you explain how I can take care of my skin?’

Hope this helps. And good luck with your treatment! 🙏🏼☺️