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Steve Jobs' speech I want to give you some information about video that I've recently stumble into on YouTube. It's about 3 stories from Steve Jobs' life and I would like to tell you about the first one. It's about connection between dots. Speaker think that every event in our lives will relate in the future. Steve had chosen expensive college and spent all parents' savings on courses. But he didn't like discipline that was teached in courses and he decided to drop out from college. It was tough time. He live in friend's dorm room and returned coke bottles for 5 cents. Oneday Jobs intuitively drop in calligraphy courses. This accident turns out to be priceless later on. He learns about serif, fonts and typefaces. Speaker found it fascinating. This information helped him to create the first Macintosh. If Steve Jobs hadn't dropped out from college, he would have never dropped in course of calligraphy and figured out about serif, subtle fonts and typefaces. If he hadn't refused from required subjects, world would have never known about Apple. It turns out that it easy to capture this connection not by looking to the future but looking backwards years ago. Every person should be confidence about his gut, curiosity and intuition. Your happy future worth your worn path.
13 de abr de 2020 10:44
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Steve Jobs' speech

I want to give you some information about a video that I've recently stumbled upon <s>into</s> on YouTube. It's about 3 stories from Steve Jobs' life and I would like to tell you about the first one. It's about the connection between dots. The speaker thinks that every event in our lives <s>will</s> relates <s>in</s> to the future. Steve had chosen an expensive college and spent all his parents' savings on courses. But he didn't like discipline that was <s>teached</s> taught in these courses and he decided to drop out <s>from</s> of college. It was a tough time. He lived in a friend's dorm room and returned coke bottles for 5 cents. One day Jobs intuitively dropped in to a calligraphy course. This accident turned out to be priceless later on. He learned about serif, fonts and typefaces. The speaker found it fascinating. This information helped him to create the first Macintosh.
If Steve Jobs hadn't dropped out <s>from</s> of college, he would have never dropped in course of calligraphy and figured found out about serif, subtle fonts and typefaces. If he hadn't refused<s> from </s>to study the required subjects, the world would have never known about Apple. It turns out that it is easy to capture this connection not by looking to the future but looking backwards years ago. <s>Every person </s> Everyone should be <s>confidence </s>confident about his gut feeling, curiosity and intuition. Your happy future worth your worn path.<em>?</em>
13 de abril de 2020
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Steve Jobs' speech

I want to give you some information about a video that I <s>'ve</s> recently stumbled onto on YouTube. It's <s>about</s> 3 stories from Steve Jobs' life, and I would like to tell you about the first one. It's about the connection between dots. The speaker thinks that every current event in our lives will relate in the future.

Steve had chosen an expensive college and spent all of his parents' savings on courses. <s>But</s> However, he didn't like the discipline that was <s>teached</s> taught in the courses, <s>and</s> so he decided to drop out <s>from</s> of college.

It was a tough time. He lived in a friend's dorm room and returned Coke bottles for 5 cents. One day Jobs <s>intuitively</s> dropped in on a calligraphy class out of curiosity. <s>courses.</s> This <s>accident</s> incident turned out to be priceless later on. He learned about serif, fonts, and typefaces. The speaker/narrator found it fascinating. This information helped him to create the first Macintosh.

If Steve Jobs hadn't dropped out <s>from</s> of college, he would have never dropped in on a course <s>of</s> in calligraphy and <s>figured out</s> learned about serif, subtle fonts, and typefaces. If he hadn't refused to take the <s>from </s>required subjects, the world would have never known about Apple. It turns out that it is easy to see <s>capture </s> this connection not by looking to the future, but by looking backwards to years past. <s>ago. </s>

Every person should be confident about his gut, curiosity, and intuition. Your happy future is worth your difficult <s>worn</s> path.

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13 de abril de 2020
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Steve Jobs' speech

I want to give you some information about a video that I've recently <s>stumble</s> found <s>into</s> on YouTube. It's<s> about</s> 3 stories from Steve Jobs' life and I would like to tell you about the first one. It's about <s>connection between dots</s> connecting the dots. The speaker thinks that every event in our lives will be relative in the future. Steve had chosen an expensive college and spent all his parents' savings on different courses. But he didn't like <s>discipline </s>the subjects that <s>was teached</s> were taught <s>in courses</s> and he decided to drop out from college. It was a tough time. He lived in a friend's dorm room and returned coke bottles for 5 cents a can. One day Jobs <s>intuitively</s> accidently dropped in on a  <s>in</s> calligraphy course. This accident turns out to be priceless later on. He learns about serif, fonts and typefaces. The speaker found it fascinating. This information helped him to create the first Macintosh computer.
If Steve Jobs hadn't dropped out of college, he would have never dropped in on a course for calligraphy and found out about serif, subtle fonts and typefaces. If he hadn't rejected the required subjects, the world would have never known about Apple. It turns out that it easy to <s>capture</s> see this connection not by looking to the future but by looking backwards years <s>ago </s>later. Every person should be <s>confidence</s> confident about <s>his</s> their gut feeling, curiosity and intuition. Your <s>happy future worth your worn path</s> future happiness may depend on it.

<em>You have to use the word 'computer' after Macintosh as in the UK a 'Macintosh' is also a word for a rain coat.</em>
13 de abril de 2020
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