Ksu Makarova
Some people think that life-long friendship exists only in books and films. Others - in real life... Some people believe that endless friendship exists only in books and films. Others think that it exists in real life. In my composition I'm going to express my personal opinion and debate with me opponents. In my opinion, friendship that lasts as long as life exists only in films. As a rule, people make friends only with those who have similar interests. People change their interests throughout their life. So, the first reason for impossibility of endless friendship is people's changing interests. Moreover, we all move to new places during the life. A long distance friendship doesn't have many chances to grow stronger, because real friendship is a real communication, not a virtual one. Therefore, the second reason is moving away. Along with changing places or interests, a person's character changes. So do our friends. It is the third reason against life-long friendship. However, opponents of this point of view say that true friendship exists no matter what happens. Their strongest argument is that friendship is a very deep feeling. Moreover, some people believe that friends can forgive each other whatever happens. Well, of course, it is a very strong feeling, but time passes and makes you feel in a different way. And I do not think that everyone can forgive anything. Sometimes a small quarrel can become a reason for destroying one's friendship. In conclusion, I am strongly convinced that endless friendship is not a real thing. But everyone decides for himself what opportunity to choose.
21 de fev de 2013 13:06
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good, could you help me write this? thanks
21 de fevereiro de 2013
I have the best friend. We are friends 17 years. And I believe whatever it happened always she will be help me.
21 de fevereiro de 2013

Some people think that life-long friendship exists only in books and films. Others - in real life...

Some people believe that endless friendship exists only in books and films. Others think that it exists in real life. In my composition I'm going to express my personal opinion and debate with my opponents.

In my opinion, friendship that lasts as long as life exists only in films. As a rule, people make friends only with those who have similar interests. People change their interests throughout their life. So, the first reason for the impossibility of endless friendship is people's changing interests. Moreover, we all move to new places during the life. A long distance friendship doesn't have many chances to the potential to grow stronger because real friendship is a real involves communication done in person. This would be harder to maintain not a virtual one through long distances. Therefore, The second reason is moving away. Along with changing places or interests, a person's character changes and so do our friends' characters. It is the third reason against life-long friendships.

However, opponents of this point of view say that true friendship exists no matter what happens. Their strongest argument is that friendship is a very deep feeling. Moreover, some people believe that friends can forgive each other whatever no matter what happens.

Well, Of course it is a very strong feeling, but time passes and makes you feel in a different way. And I do not think that everyone can forgive anything anybody as sometimes a small quarrel can become a reason for destroying one's friendship.

In conclusion, I am strongly convinced that endless friendships are not real, but everyone can decide what to choose for himself. what opportunity to choose.

 

Good work. I tried not to change much of your writing. Hope you improve your style.

21 de fevereiro de 2013
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