Ideal Job vs Money FCE

(Essay ) Is it (It is) better to earn a lot of money or to enjoy your job?
1 how much time is spent at work? 
2 what (the) type of work (which) is done? 

These days, one of the most important (relevant) steps for young people (in youth) is choosing a professional path and considering your earnings (the earning) as a consequence. (conseguence.) What do a sizeable (an hearty) salary and a satisfying job mean to you?

(On one side,) It is reported that the average time spent at work is eight (of 8) hours, so, just assuming (therefore if) we don't (didn't) enjoy our work, then the rest (part) of our day could suffer. (would be dramatically ruined .) In fact, job satisfaction and happiness contribute (insure) more towards a quality lifestyle. (in the results.) 

Often, when the type of job of your dreams turns to (into) reality, it becomes a conundrum whether or not (puzzling) to refuse such a tempting offer. (an ideal position.) 
It is fair to say that, (Thus) initially, a high quality job may come with (worth) a low reward, but it all depends (depending) on our financial priorities. (though.) 

However, to conclude, it's important to balance our professional (prodessional) achievements and income. (,) In order to do so, we should focus on our skills and find the most appropriate employment for ourselves before rushing into decisions we may later regret. (committing rushy and unrepairable mistakes)

Very well done! Nicely constructed and interesting to read. I have suggested a few more natural phrases in parts, so as to polish up your article.