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I enjoyed summer vacation this year. I have studied abroad in Australia for six weeks. It was first time for me to visit foreign country alone. However, that experience was changed me. I spent with host family. They are a family of seven. Every day I spoke English and played with children. Most surprised things is large of country. Australia is island like Japan, but large is different it. Anywhere I can see sky because of without many buildings. House was not apartment. Almost it is one story house. Also, I surprised kind of Aussie. They help me when I confused alone. Especially, bus attendant always tough bus station for me. I wanna speak English smoothly.
28 de set de 2023 04:24
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I enjoyed summer vacation this year. I studied abroad in Australia for six weeks. It was the first time for me to visit a foreign country alone. The experience changed me. I stayed with a host family. They are a family of seven. Every day I spoke English and played with the children. The most surprising thing was the size of the country. Australia is an island like Japan, but the size is different. I could see the sky anywhere because there were not many buildings. The house was not an apartment, but almost a one story house. Also, I surprised by the kindness of Aussies. They helped me when I was confused and alone. Especially, the bus attendant. always tough bus station for me (sorry I couldn't understand that sentence). I want to speak English smoothly.
Good effort - keep working on it! To start with, rembember that most nouns require an article.
28 de setembro de 2023
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