Wendy
Are there any mistakes? Could you help me make it easier ? Do you know AI? I feel closer and closer to us. I watched the Spring Festival Gala this year, and there was a program that shocked me. Robots danced yangko. I used to think that only people can learn to turn handkerchiefs, and only when they are familiar with life can they often do it. Today, when robots learn, they completely replace humans. The beautiful dance on the stage reminds me that not only the stage is occupied, but also many artificial jobs are in jeopardy. If they don't study hard, they may be eliminated by society in the future. It is a little scary to be replaced by robots, but after this incident, I will study hard and strive that robots can only be our human tools, and I am their manipulator.
7 de fev de 2025 05:41
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Are there any mistakes? Could you help me make it easier ? Do you know AI? I feel closer and closer to us. I watched the Spring Festival Gala this year, and there was a program that shocked me. Robots danced yangko. I used to think that only people can learn to turn handkerchiefs, and only when they are familiar with life can they often do it. Today, when robots learn, they completely replace humans. The beautiful dance on the stage reminds me that not only the stage is occupied, but also many artificial jobs are in jeopardy. If they don't study hard, they may be eliminated by society in the future. It is a little scary to be replaced by robots, but after this incident, I will study hard and strive that robots can only be our human tools, and I am their manipulator. Are you familiar with AI? It seems like it's rapidly becoming part of everyday life. I watched the Spring Festival Gala this year, and there was a scene that shocked me: robots performing the famous Yangko dance! I used to think only humans could manage the complex moves of this folk dance—and even then only after a great deal of practice. But today, it's clear robots are entirely capable of matching the performance of human dancers. Watching the flawless dance moves of the robots on stage convinced me that more than just the jobs of professional dancers are in jeopardy: many kinds of jobs are threatened by the emergence of AI and robotics. I fear anyone who doesn't study hard to maximize their employment value will soon be vulnerable to job loss. The prospect of getting replaced by a robot is scary, but after seeing those robot dancers, I resolve to strive to elevate my skills. In doing so, I hope robots will remain my tools, and I their master.
7 de fev de 2025 08:36
Are there any mistakes? Could you help me make it easier ? Are you familiar with AI? I feel it is getting closer and closer to us. I watched the Spring Festival Gala this year, and there was a program that shocked me. Robots danced yangko. I used to think that only people can learn to turn handkerchiefs, and only when they are familiar with life can they do it. Today, when robots are programmed, they completely replace humans. The beautiful dance on the stage reminds me that not only the stage is occupied, but also many jobs are in jeopardy. If children/earners don't study hard, they may be eliminated by society in the future. It is a little scary to be replaced by robots, but after this incident, I will study hard and strive to make robots our human tools, and I am their manipulator.
7 de fev de 2025 08:14
'Do you know about AI? I feel like it’s getting closer and closer to us. I watched the Spring Festival Gala this year, and one performance shocked me—robots were dancing yangko! I always thought only people could learn to spin handkerchiefs and that it required real-life experience. But now, robots are learning and completely replacing humans in some areas. The beautiful dance on stage made me realize that AI isn’t just taking over performances—it’s also replacing many jobs. If we don’t keep learning, we might be left behind by society. It’s a little scary to think about being replaced by robots, but after seeing this, I’m more motivated than ever to study hard. I believe AI should only be a tool for humans, and we should be the ones in control.'
Hi Wendy! First, I want to say that I am equally amazed with the current state of AI and robotics! I think they will make the world a better place and will make humans lives easier! Here is a corrected version that I rewrote for you - let me know if you have any questions:
7 de fev de 2025 05:48
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