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It’s the season of a peach in Japan. In ancient era , Peach was considered a mysterious food. It trow away something bad or gives it mysterious power. I can understand it because it is very delicious. I would like to eat a peach everyday!
8 июля 2022 г., 9:56
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It’s the peach season in Japan. In ancient era, peaches were considered has a mysterious fruit. It drives off anything bad or gives mysterious power. I can understand it because it is very delicious. I would like to eat a peach everyday!
Good work. Are all fruits in Japan come from Yamanashi, or are there fruit producers elsewhere?
8 июля 2022 г.
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It’s the season of peach in Japan. In ancient eras, peach was considered a mysterious food. It pushed away something bad or gives mysterious power. I can understand it because it is very delicious. I would like to eat a peach everyday!
Notes: 1. I made adjustments with capitalization and word choices. 2. I hope peaches won't taste bitter when I can finally taste them. Best Regards, Daffa
8 июля 2022 г.
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It’s the season of the peach in Japan. In the ancient era , Peach was considered to be a mysterious food. It gets rid of anything bad or gives it mysterious power. I can understand it because it is very delicious. I would like to eat a peach everyday!
Good job! ☑️ 🍑 is my favourite summer fruit. I love eating them while I’m at the beach. 🏖 Have a nice day!
8 июля 2022 г.
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