Polly
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
13 нояб. 2020 г., 17:31
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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. Volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team sport. Also, I like to learn languages: English and Chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Just a few minor changes to make it flow more smoothly. Your message was very understandable.
13 ноября 2020 г.
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Good text
13 ноября 2020 г.
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