Life just needs to be lived more effectively. People need to learn how to be strong and keep going on after any unfortunate situation. Instead of speaking matter-of-factly, framing things politely is helpful in having a good relationship. Expressions like, for example,"could you please " and "would you like" for diplomatic questions are useful for asking questions more politely !!
Jumping in right away, trying new things, is a good approach to life. 😁.
The vocabulary is pretty good, but there are a number of issues with the grammar.