Molly
Last night, I stayed up late because I had to walk around Hoankiem Lake since I didn't walk in the morning. However, I still managed to get up early in the morning.
15 авг. 2023 г., 23:09
Исправления · 7
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No mistakes, but your sentence contains three complete sentences: "I stayed up late", "I had to walk", and "I didn't walk". That is a cumbersome structure. Three subjects and three verbs! I like that you are using verbs, but don't carry it to extremes. Pick out the key action and let that be your verb: "Having missed my morning walk, I stayed up late last night to walk around Hoankiem Lake. Even so, I still managed to wake up early in the morning."
16 августа 2023 г.
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Last night, I stayed up late because I had to walk around Hoan Kiem Lake since I didn't walk in the morning. However, I still managed to get up early in the morning.
16 августа 2023 г.
1
Last night, I stayed up late because I had to walk around Hoan Kiem Lake since I didn't walk earlier in the morning. Nevertheless, I still managed to get up early in the morning.
16 августа 2023 г.
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китайский (путунхуа), английский, французский, японский, корейский, вьетнамский
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